Hai,I have a query here,I am reading this book and it's quite enjoyable,am a stickler for details though... you describe Hudson as having blond hair and blue eyes,then Val as having brown hair with green eyes right?but I have seen her calling him Nigga twice now,isn't that a black thing??
Kinda have cliche part✓ Mc w/ Past Life Memories and Fire Attribute✓ Silver haired little sister with Yin Constitution✓ Caring Mother✓Engagement✓ Some opposive family members.✓higher realmBut who cares for generic characters as long as they are good, What I like is consistency of the story that won't make you drop it easily and will keep your interest (from the past novel of author haha). MC's not to cocky and he learned from his past life mistake (not all who have reincarnated are matured), I can see potential heroines and looking forward for their twisted development 😂 , It is fun to read if you are harem lover with non-harem-seeking-Protagonist (he hasn't show his desire yet?) . Plus points for the Chinese Names that should be in these kind of settings (xianxia, xuanhuan, wuxia). It's still to early to judge but I'm kinda excited for the development especially those characters around MC. Despite having some typo, G errors, and redundancy the writing method and how author narrates story is good and easy to understand. Overall it is highly recommended is you have like this kind of genre, if not then you can try it as well we all welcome potential Men of culture.
This novel was interesting until chapter 19. We have a cautious, steady, paranoid protagonist. Why is he like this? Because unlike other players...if he dies in the game - it's all over. He will die for real. So of course he'll be afraid of being hurt (let alone the prospect of death).And then it happened. From chapter 20 this novel became a [audience] reaction novel. Protagonist spends 10 chapters messing around with artefact upgrading gacha, and random audience react to it. I thought after 10 chapters of suffering the novel will finally move on...but no! Instead, there's even more filler as the author introduces a random character just so he can talk more about artefacts some more! This level of filler is absolutely crazy. In the first 40 chapters, 50% is worthless filler. It's too much.
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Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.
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