I Died

Beautiful. Looking forward to reading more 🫶🏾

I am writing this after reading up to chapter 16.The story is interesting and has some new concepts. The plot progression is slow but only up to the point when the author is explaining about the System and the status window. I have read many System novels but only a small number of them actually details about the Status Screens. This novel is one of them!Then there is the world building. Honestly, the number of chapters is still less to tell exactly how good the world building is but from they way the author described the village, I can tell they would do a good job in this field.There are many good things about the novel like daily updates, good writing quality and a nice description of everything. But let's also talk about some drawbacks. One could say that the story is moving very slowly but I am a LOTM reader so I like the pace. The one thing you should work on is to give some ups and downs to the story to make it more interesting.Although I say that, keep doing what you're doing as I can see it improving as the new chapters come in. I like the novel and will continue reading it👍. I hope it keeps on getting better and better...

review for event. I like the interactions between the characters and look forward to finding out more about their power system. Some of the sentences are clunky or think the wrong word was used but still very easily readable. MC zombie queen -> Eva is adorable and life is worth living if you have fluff and food! I wonder with being able to experience living again if she will remain a bookworm? Early chapters have set up the world well and clearly shown the relationships of the main characters. Very glad to have tried this story and am eager to read more 😊

But since he was `only a human´, she had considered him too far below her notice to even take him serious.

Only shooting stars

Celestial

Roy " Hey Al we finally meet up!" He started to give a big bear hug to his friend. When hi head  was close enough to his ear he whispered  " Man finally you got yourself a girlfriend! I am proud of you! As I started to worry that you are gay! As I never saw you together with a girl!!!"

It was the night before the decisive battle with the Sitri family, Rias and her peerage was gathered together in Naruto's room in order to have their last meeting before the final showdown. Hearing him saying something like that, Rias' only choice was dropping her mouth in shock.