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Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
When I took the assessment, It was a little above the one minute mark before I couldn't last any longer which means I'm still only in the Core Consciousness stage…
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