I Am Number One

I thought it must be like other billionaire stories but burhhhhhh naah' this is so different from what I've read till now.  the emotional connectivity with characters worked out well and I must say the book makes me to wanna live in it. update more chapters author. waiting!!!!!!!!

it is going well.................mmmmmm..... ffgjkjfguufdjgsfjikcxvnbdtyjhaawyluay ftjgfkgffikggkcgkgfujjcgkcjjgfhvcgh alas de la tienda que vende todo junto con saludar adjunto currículum que te calles del barrio de la familia de la familia de la tienda en el futuro cancela tu propio usuario mediante

Pro'sYou can see the writing quality improving as the story continuesMC can cultivate outside of the systemCon's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world developmentThe system is an almost a non-existent part of the storyCertain story points that are added for plot are illogicalQing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master-The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.

I hope those people get crushed for trying to cause trouble in Shirou's back yard. I really cannot stand tragedies so if you are planning to kill one of his girls or make Saber into an enemy please give a heads up. I love the story but I would not be able to continue reading if that happened.  Thanks for the chapter.

[I haven't drunk in a while hopefully I can find a water source at the end of the forest or at least in the city.

Prague too nodded and said, "That's true, However, the biggest surprise was the arithmetic Professor Liam who has announced that he will head to North-frontier town. I wonder what persuaded him to make such a decision to work there? He even proclaimed that anyone pursuing a career in Arithmetic and Mathematics should follow him to North-frontier town for higher studies. Anyway, he has always been an odd one when it comes to certain things. However, I don't think he was Joking when it came to the topic of arithmetic and mathematics.

"It seems the original Wolf-man captured the alpha from the wolf pack and managed to transform him. The curse also forced the new Wolf-man to become the creator's subordinate." I explained as I shrugged.

"I know that all of you must be confused why you are here. Right?" The king was pretty friendly with them.