In my subjective opinion, I quite like this novel but somehow the translation is getting worse since the beginning or maybe the editing..anyway, reading it now is not enjoyable with the writing lines or paragraph all over the place.
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!Io started it thinking it was just another virtual reality thing without any sort of appeal, but it turns out it's a totally different story with unusual development and great, great - did I say great?- writing and good character design.The world building starts and develop relatively slowly but you will almost never want to skip a paragraph, so I can't say it's really slow (unless you don't like the few '****-romance' dialogue between protagonist and girlfriend, which, however, I think are extraordinary well written for a novel)Tu sum it all up, awesome! Keep up the good work, author!
I would suggest webnovel to revert the name to original eng name. This name sounds bad. Also concerning the fact about the previous translator. They were doing it illegally.
This book is a captivating and well-structured read that flows effortlessly from chapter to chapter. The characters are thoughtfully developed, each adding depth to the story. I find myself eagerly waiting for the next installment. One suggestion for improvement is to give more attention to the characters that are introduced, allowing them to stay in the narrative longer. This would enhance our understanding of the world and make the story even more immersive. Overall, it's an excellent read that I highly recommend!
Sensing that Melissa's consciousness was just a few millimeters more to reach, she increased her mental output and urged the two men to call her out the loudest they can.
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