Hunter X Hunter: The Strongest Assassin Of The Zoldyck Family!

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.

Melissa's eyelids began to twitch.

As Heng Huan saw Ting Mei's glistening eyes eying his crepe, he couldn't help but sigh, " Was this crepe more good looking than him or what? "

As for Chen Xi, he merely played the role of a middleman, and in his eyes, he didn't attach much importance to Chen Xi. However, at this moment, when he saw Chen Xi's actions and persistence, he noticed that he seemed to have underestimated this little fellow, and his mentality unconsciously changed greatly.

It's OK dude. Just take some time and fix your life.

"..."

I could use a little fuel myself