I’m starting to see a trend with Lumydee’s novels…Tech King (first novel) - MC has a system that really doesn’t care about its host.Amusement Park (second novel) - MC has a symbiotic relationship with his system, neither is dominant in the relationship.Host what are you? (Third novel) - MC just thrashes his system around.This novel (fourth novel) - System is utterly dominating/ tormenting the host.What’s next? A system that does everything for its host… wait actually that’s a pretty good idea, a system that hasn’t ever gotten a host and is excited when it got a cowardly and weak host and develops some yandere tendencies when it finds out how useless the MC is. Using the Lumydee style of naming novels I dub it “Who dares touch my Host!” If you ever take my idea and not give credit I’ll sue you for like 6 dollars and a can of soda.
Dropped at chapter 3Author makes it seem like mc has special ability of seeing hisnabilities by chapter 3 sister talks about how everyone can do thatAuthor shows incestuous behaviour by quantity of references to sisters appearance Terminology of levels is skewed, any other novel before jumping to celestial power you need to devlop earthly power. By that i mean tempering body, mind soul etc not straight away jping to soaring the heavens with names like nebula power
I enjoyed reading this book. From startt to finish. I like the development ojf the story that i almost could not put the book down. Sadly ☹️☹️ it was cut. Please bring on the next chapters. Pleeeeaaaaassssseeee.
Novels like these are the reason qidian needs to give us a preview chapter in the voting system. So basically this seemed like a cool new cultivation/western fantasy from just reading the synopsis however after first 12 chapters I can tell you it is a rushed pile of sh*t. So we start of with some random mages being described and then straight to our protagonist who is apparently from some fallen clan, typical beggining stuff not great not too bad. And from then the story goes downhill, cultivation is handled poorly we are not showed how did he feel or do his first casting of a spell, which is told of in a one sentence. Next comes a timeskip and before even fully describing what happened author does another timeskip. After that more time is spent with stupid dialogues about rule of the jungle than basic world building. I will not describe everything but these first 12 chapters were simply unimpressive, which is weird since author should show the vision for his novel in early chapters. This story might get better but i doubt it, however the translation quality is good and as for update stablity it is too early to judge.
I decided to make Yoru the one with the highest popularity by giving him 200000 points because he's best boy, Also here's 20 golden tickets since I never use them
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