Holy System

On a lighter note #3

Reagan: "WHAT THE FUCK WOMAN!"

have warned you to mind the type of friends you hang out with, now see what it caused, Esther cuts in

quite titillating

You'll never shine if you don't glow

the writing and description overall is good  though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough  it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D

Again, the Author has a great way of describing everything, the use of words, the grammar, the storyline, the title— seamless. Can't wait for more chapters!😊💖

It's a good story. Wonderful story, Character building

Honestly it’s so confusing that I don’t know where to start feels like the intro to the main story, which is him reincarnating to the prince of wales is way too long. Like it take over 15 chapters and even we got mauve through the generic how do I deal with this guy who’s sons body I’m in.Honestly feels like a Never ending intro which is disappointing since the story idea about wales is quite intriguing.

amazing book. Hard to stop reading and one just have to know how the two wild and strong characters will move on in the story.