Holy System

What would a villain would do if he's in 'retirement'.. Especially when the villain is only 16 years old.. If you are curious then read this and find out.. 😁😁

The plot is slow moving and at times feels more like a slice of life, but with a system in the background. It's a rather fun, slow read. If you are looking for action than this is not for you, but if you want a hard working, normal Mc then this is for you.

that is a f***ing Interesting idea for a story premiseif this story has decent adversaries and predicaments, then we are gold........,............    .................................mmm

I could not take the bad grammar, I read someone said it will be better. They might be right. However, usually people just get used to it over time.Character development in the start is shallow and copied. Story is a typical "MC is a never bored character that can train forever without stopping and needs money for his sick mother, but could not finish more that high school"Might be better later, but I would bet it is just average.

idk i feel like the ppl who review thia very low really didn't read the story for the story. Besides the fact that the author ia using some random power trips to make the mc stronger without choice and some annoying af charcater i.e Spoiler: (*) the fact that he made an emotional scene about a grasshopper work pretty well speaks volumes on the novels potential.* the ice ability and that damn spirit who didnt let him choose to be in a contract

Well i'm not realllt good at giving review but, despite have 'lord' in the title it's becoming less and less feels like 'lord' novel and more of a power fantasy at this point.Well i don't know if this one is bother anyone or it's just really me but, Tiara... she is someone Michael open up and always with him from he start as a lord but it's feels she just fading in the background and just become another side character that doesn't feel important at all.Maria... Why did you include her in the story if you just gonna do her dirty like that? Her entire purpose is give michael mark of fate until michael make healing soultrait himself.Alice... It's just feels too rush.Well sorry about my rampant, I just want to let it out somehow, and sorry if what i said is difficult to understand, English isn't my first language.

Seems a bit redundant. Idk… take over the women in his family, go to next kingdom, do the same seems to be general layout. it’s not bad I guess but when you add in the fact that he won’t have to struggle or put in much effort to gain the women in his family because their love for him is 90+, I have a feeling I won’t enjoy it as much as I could have. But for those of you looking to read something like this, where a son conquers the entire family etc, this is probably right up your alley. One bit of advice I have for the author is to change Bro -> Brother. And don’t say bro in every sentence the little sister says. Whether or not it’s a Chinese setting, bro in every sentence and in and of itself seems a bit off to me. Then add on the fact that it is a Chinese setting, using the word brother would definitely be the more suitable choice. If you ever go back to edit things, I think scaling down the numbers would make it more easier to understand. Numbers in the thousands and then millions just for dealing with one session of s * x is about… yeah. You could easily get away with making everything 100* smaller and not losing out on anything. I’ll be dropping for now. If this appears on the rankings because it’s become very popular i might pick up again. See you later, maybe.

Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be