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A trash transltation of trash novel. 🤢🤮💩💩💩💩

Hi, Author! I want permission, am I allowed to make Master of Time's novel FanFict? I mean, I will try to make a novel with the strength and some of the stories in your Master of Time novel, such as the Bermuda Triangle section, the power of time, aspects, primordials, as well as several companies, only with the difference that I set it in an Asian country. If allowed, please reply to the Author. FYI, I write novels just to let out my imagination and have fun. Plus, I included elements of other anime fiction too, so the story is different from yours. BTW, I still hope you will continue with the novel Master of Time.

started on this a few months ago and literally used all my fast passes and coins to catch up to 10 chapter privilege. don't regret it one bit. love the cultivation, harem, fights, and while sorta slow at the start the growth rate speeds up nicely later on. by far my fave cultivation, harem novel on WN

The writing quality is really bad. Even though Mc reincarnated he is unsure in a lot of things. I dont know if it is a game novel or Library novel. Just throwwing a lot of informations.

So no spoilers. This book so far as I have read which is to Chapter 20. I know it is not a lot the translation seems to be machined or the person who translate does not understand English needs to be edited bad. You can get the gist of what is going on. The overall story is not horrible but the MC plot armor is super thick everything just happens no build up or accident. I think it was suppose to be accidental but if so the author or translater all failed that. Otherwise I would at least give this a shot for the free chaps and if you like it keep going. For me till this thing is edited to make sense I am done.

Nice work dude, keep it up. I'm also new here so let's support each other. Keep going.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping.I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.

The MC is moron. No really, he is, and even admits to it himself. Now there are ways to write a compelling story featuring a protagonist with that kind of handicap, but unfortunately this novel isn't one of those. It is, and there's no way to put it politely, generic and boring as f*ck. Everything from the characters, to the plot, to the writing is a slap dash, uninspired waste of both your time and fast passes (in case anybody can even slog through to reach the premium chapters). Give this one a pass. A hard pass.