i tried reading but could not get past the first 10 chapters. Story itself is good, but bad English ruins experience. I could barely get into the story, every other paragraph, i had to re-read a sentence and correct it in my mind to make sense of it. Tenses are all over the places, sentence structures feel unnatural and painful to read.
Typical Cultivation and Transmigration Novel. Started off fine, but MC is still referred to as Andy. I dont care that was his previous worlds name and he doesnt feel like he belongs in this world. If the setting has only chinese names, adapt your MC to have a chinese name. If he wanted to pay homage to his name Andy here is a good name for you to use. An Di. Faking his suicide and adapting a new name is a good plot point. Since he doesnt want to be around that clan its good to be out on his own as he knows the story and its plot. But seriously to use an English name and no one thinks that it isnt weird?Had to drop because the name Andy was in nearly every paragraph each chapter. Very hard to get into a story that is supposed to be Chinese Cultivation but somehow isnt due to a single word.
everything would be okay about this novel, but the MC is so infuriating that i just can't read it anymore. when he's not using evil heart, he's just ughhh (trusts and helps whoever, would rather get killed than kill, can't make any smart choices or stand for himself) in short i recommend reading only by skipping chapters, otherwise you'll want MC dead all the time (I've read up to i think chapter 80)
VR GAME novel with harem is one of my favorite and this novel gives be the same vibe as shura's wrath and evil dragon against the heaven.i am enjoying so far and very excited to read more chapters .
-good story-great characters-interesting setting-loli *nosebleed*-no op protagonist-sadly no update for loooong timeI can recommend this story to you. It's free, but you dont have a lot to read. Hopefully the autor comes back to finish this soon :-)
Honestly I'm loving this story. Professor Kal is a riot. I don't really mind the slow update schedule since you actually put a lot of effort to having good Grammer. I think I've see like one or two mistakes in the whole book so far. Really enjoying the story and can't wait for more
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