I think it's good but with the good comes the bad, the MCs first subordinate, her name changes every few paragraphs If it didn't do that and the author was consistent with the names then it'd be great But it's so annoying to see the leader of the place (MCs first subordinate) have her name change from Rachel to Quinn to Sarah to others and back
Pretty good! I just kinda stumbled along this, not been on the site for long but I like eating up webnovels like this. A little interesting, definitely a bit better written than some other webnovels I’ve seen. I like the characters already. A bit heavy handed on the smut off the bat, you could probably make a decent pornographic short story with that kinda stuff (lol).All in all, I do like it. Setting is your classic fantasy setting. Humans are numerous and racist (as they should be). MC is half-beast instead of full human. I smell a harem coming on, though I would prefer it small if only to save the author a headache in the future to try to remember all the characters they’d make. In some stories, there’s so many characters that they all feel one dimensional. It’s best to flesh out few main characters than millions.Looking forwards to see where this goes.
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