when are u going to upload chapters? its been a while since this is here and i shill havent seen a single chapter. i also tried to search for the original novel but i couldnt find it.
I'm gonna be honest here. The story is really interesting. While attracting the readers, it provides an enjoyable read. However, there are some things that were annoying. I'm going to give a review now:─Writing Quality 5/5Word Usage: Let me give you a piece of advice here: DON'T try to use different words and phrases UNTIL you've thoroughly understood the usage of that word/phrase in a real sentence. Using synonyms is fine to not have repetitive words; however, if you've not still come to understand where, when, or how to use it, it would be better to not use it at all and go for the same word you know how to use.Word Repetition: Some words get used too much in every paragraph. For example, I got annoyed hearing "her" every few seconds while reading. I checked until chapter 12 and there were like +600 times that you used "her
While I might not have officially started the first chapter of this book yet, I have been there in the previous versions of it, and I can tell you for a fact that this author has amazing writing quality and the story is great and flows smoothly, and as far as I can remember there aren’t major info dumps every other chapterSide note: author, if you ever want to delete this book again, can you please post a chapter saying why, cause I was so confused the last time you deleted it and had to stalk your account to find thisAlso
The old man leads a path through the thick tall bamboo like grass. They come across a clearing. It was beautiful, there was a boulder in the center of the clearing, with bright green moss camouflaging it. Delicious scented flowers covered the ground. There were yellow ones, green ones, and purple ones. They walked to the middle of the clearing, a glowing fiery object starts to fall from the sky.
Flinging away my peed-on arm as if it was the source of the plague, I tried to raise my other arm, the dominant one. However, nothing happened. I gave it another try, only to yield the same result. Nothing happened.
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