I only got to chapter 10 since I thought it would get better. Some Mc's do dumb stuff but this MC just has a general disconnect with intelligence. Honestly this idiot and his father should be placed in a government lab. Their lack of intelligence makes them a danger to themselves.
The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site.The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something.This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.
The paths the story takes are very intriguing, at first you think you know where the story is going, but then it just follows a different path than imagined and the author doesn’t give a damn about simply killing characters that were built throughout history and are important to the MC.I am going to keep reading this because it feels real, you really feels the MC changing and Robert teachings influencing him together with the shit he went through.
I’m sad that this isn’t Silent Clown... I misread it as such, and it would have made such a good title! Like a mime, but better! Think of it, if this was the silent clown, you’d have a cultivating mime running around being a badass while being like, “You’re in a box! Let me pull it with this invisible rope.”
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Started reading when there is a free read trial and now become addicted to it. Aah what to say? Highly likable MC AND TENSION FILLED CHAPTERS. Side characters are likable and flow of story is seamless. Overall a feel good novel. Highly recommended if you guys want to experience a new feeling other than reading novels like SS, SM, MTWV AND OTHER classic novels!
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