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Yoona melangkah mundur, itu dikarenakan Sehun bergerak mendekatinya. Terus melangkah mundur hingga tubuhnya tertahan oleh pagar pembatas. Tubuhnya lantas mematung dihadapan pria itu yang kini mengepung dirinya. Dapat dirasakan olehnya hembusan nafas pria itu. Perlahan Sehun mendekatkan wajahnya, semakin mendekat, hingga hampir saling menyentuh, pria itu menghentikan gerakannya.

'shit normally I wouldn't give a fuck about my presents but this year is different this old geezer got me.'

When we finally finish, we both lay next to each other in the cot. He has me in his arms and I suddenly feel the need to sleep again. That was better than I expected it to be. Although I was sore all over, I felt this sense of bliss. I really can't believe it happened, but I'm so glad it did.

A few moments later.

"Oh thats sound interesting," said me  casually.

Really enjoying the read so far. The turn of events is really something unpredicted. Keep it updated thank you.PS dont get yourself attached to any of the charachters lol.

Hi there I'm the author of this story and this how Zareth will look in the last timeskip but please enjoy.

I’ve read up to where it is currently, but from what I can tell so far, it’s very good. The world is genuinely thought out and the characters show real emotion. Of course there are some tropes, however that seems to a major plot point the story will revolve around. There are very minor grammar errors around the story but nothing large enough to justify a lower than 5 star rating. The only glaring I see right now is the update schedule. Creativity is hard to come by sometimes though so I have that a 3 for now. No issues anywhere else though. If you’re similar to me and you like reading reviews before starting a story, you should definitely give this story a try. There aren’t many chapters currently, but I’m sure you might enjoy it.I hope this review will give the author a little motivation through this story. :))