H Y P E R S P A C E

really interesting novel! good start! congrats Jasmine!  

Great fantasy story full of mages and magic using beings. The Author does a fantastic job of combining a fairly complex magic system with a pretty simple concept of power levels. The Author uses this to write battles with realistic (in terms of the world) twists and out comes. When the MC and an antagonist come to blows and their of “equal strength” the MC does win just because of some “MC plot-armor bullsh*t” it’s because the Author laid down the groundwork for why he learned and obtained the skills and abilities to pull through. Even when someone does manage to seemingly pull some solution out of their a*s it’s because the Author left the information and reasonings behind in primitive chapters that were (mostly on purpose) meant to be overlooked as unimportant.Characters and character development is always one of the most important things to look at for in any story. In this both aspects are pretty straightforward. The MC has a lot of dark sh*t happen to him in the prologue & start of the series and that leaves us with a very untrusting and paranoid protagonist who is  also severely protective of those who are are close to him. The main theme of the story is that the MC is going about his life while gaining strength in various ways in order be able to protect those he cares about and fulfill a few spoiler related goals while his interactions with those around both help and hinder him from slowly opening up to others. The Author does a good job of providing scenarios that that the MC has to contemplate while balancing his law of the jungle and his moral/human side in order to survive both physically and mentally. This series is not a “black & white” story by any means and would recommend it to any high fantasy loving reader.

Concept is cool but everything else is pretty bad.The MC doesn't even try to hide it, it's pretty bland, MC is prideful and 2D, it's brain-dead is the best description.If you want something generic, boring and overly sensitive but also prideful MC turn off your brain and read this.

This novel has the usual plus point of the author which is the characters he create and the feelings they express. The negative of this novel is that the world building of this novel is a complete mess and the translator's translation quality is a bit lacking.

Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO.  This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language.  Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC.  As the author gains experience writing should get better.  Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!

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