Grey [HIATUS]

"What the hell are you doing kid, get the hell out of here." Mighty Man forgot to use his persona. He cleared his throat, "Please leave the premises, the villain may be conscious, it is dangerous to be here young one."

He was clean, fair and eyes that I wouldn't want to stop staring at. He was cool.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

what do I say it's the best novel. it has no Yuri lot of r18 scene and lot of things.

I'm on chapter 387, Seriously Jian Shu didn't die what a disappointment, this arc in my opinion was not good we never saw our mc fight properly and when he fought at the end he was repressed and if it wasn't for help he would have died, besides why he is still not a great master, Another point is that he just keeps flirting and doesn't advance or grow, the previous plot where there was ntr bothered me but I said let's give him another chance and boom chapters later Jun left that world and only hinted that when he comes back he will only take the useless girl he left pregnant with him, so my question is why did he love the mother and daughter and the girl from the dojo if he was just going to put them aside as waste, I hope the author changes that and when he goes to that world he takes them all, and now with the new system functions I think that will be possible, I hope the next plot will be more interesting because the first 150 chapters were pretty good, that's my opinion and a greeting.

I'm loving this story so far it's so beautiful and detailedI can't wait to see more character development on Amanda and i hope her and Elias end up together

love it, enjoy it, keep up the good work, you have a very good writing quality

protagonista é muito estupida, ela falou para um ex-marido que ela não é a vilã e que tomou o lugar dela, uma clara heresia contra os isekais