Godric Magni

"Do what? Oh! You mean water bend yeah why?"

"Move" Shirou said with irritation leaking into his voice.

Only shooting stars

<p>"Wah... ternyata aku tidak salah lihat"</p>

The story has potential, though the author obviously has barely any knowledge on formula racing. First of all, how is he racing without an FIA license. Second is he's basically a pushover. Then he goes breaking laws of physics with magical overtakes against vehicles almost twice as fast as his s*itbox.The list goes on and on with inconsistencies.

Although I wouldn't say it was the finest novel I've ever read, it was still rather good considering it was your first. The noises were the only thing that bothered me; yes, I realize that you repeated them to let the reader comprehend that they were sounds. I thought some of the laughter was inappropriate, though it may have just been "ha ha" or "haha." Some noises also were. The ticks rather than repeat could of be "the tick repeated over and over again." rathe than tick tick tick tick.

Bro if you keep this up this is going to turn out to be a fantastic book. You are cooking!!! Please tell me there will me more than 3+ in the harem.(plzzzzzz) I am planning to but the privilege soon to continue reading this.

This is actually pretty cool, it’s well planned  out and from the time of my review (at chapter 17), im really starting to get into the flow of this book. To anyone reading my review i hooe you enjoy this as much as i have.