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There's no repetative plot going bros. And the story is just on another level. The story is very serious and dark, so thinking that it might have some comedy just pass it, the story progress is great.So, its a great story, must read.
OMG! I didn't know this is on Webnovel as well. I discovered this novel on Dreame and got hooked right away, I comment on every chapter since chap 3(feeling sad and lonely cause I thought I'm the only one reading this) and then one day, my phone broke so I can't read the rest of the chapters I had purchased by coins anymore T-T. I thought I'm the only one who love this story so much. I'm so happy I'm not alone! THIS BOOK IS TRULY A HIDDEN GEM I HAD FOUND. I admire Shen Mu so much! He is a well-written strong character. I want to read more about his journey plus the romance, of course!!
Read up to chapter 6. My thoughts are thus:Quality: 5/5. Pretty easy rating to give, the writing and editing quality is superb. Not a jot or a title out of place.Development: 3/5. Not to say that it isn't interesting, but there's a lot, and I mean, A LOT, of exposition and "telling" as opposed to "showing
Some pretty good stuff. I think you do well to make his weakness bearable. The power system was just explained 30-35 chapters in but I was quite confused early on but no matter. Anyways this has some good potential and I’ll be following this (hopefully) daily, so don’t drop author :)
yo this is hilarious, anyone whose searching for a relaxing read give this a try. but not for those who searching literal masterpieces on webnovel. good read author.(only read 40 chapters so far, so rating might change later)
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