God, Stop that! Chaos Happened When She Became a He. [Dropped, Has no intention on continuing. The author got job]

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The crowd cheered for the bear as they waited for a slaughter of the girls. After wiping the sweat on her forehead, Vittoria swung her swordwhip multiple times at the bear. But the bear merely took it without protecting itself.

"Of course you'll always be fine cause I myself will protect you . No one is allowed to trouble my sister . "

So much to do, so much to see

"Gabriel… she has been taken by the Blood Dragon Emperor" Michael said with shock and urgency in that moment the heavens were on a manhunt.

Suddenly a white gas started seeping out from the air vents and reached the floor. He was startled by the gas, then his mind started connecting the dots. Realization dawned on him and he started pounding the mirror with his fists crying and pleading to let him go.

Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasn’t enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, don’t make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldn’t have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of ‘Little rascal doesn’t want to meet a bad end’. Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, that’s stupid, just enough to get him going.Don’t make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that.When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai.Don’t let him be a pushover, It’s kinda weird being a harem protagonist while you’re being dominated in bed.100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.

Interesting book, look forward to more chapters.  Keep up the good work!

a história e muito boa, uma leitura agradável!

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