Please author I beg you. Make Olivia not end with John. He doesn't deserve her. If he really loves Olivia, he will be rational. An irrational man deserves no one. People ending with them will just end in misery... It's okay to be domineering but at least rationality still be there... .........
Well, it's not that bad. It does actually have a plot, kinda. If you remove the part where he all of a sudden went from being somewhat conservative and sensible when it comes to women and sex to being a fuck boy once he got powerful enough, yeah it's nice. I don't like romance or anything sexual in a novel cause it's too cliché but I was willing to deal with this because he was sensible. It's a nice read though
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.but people say it gets crazy good later on
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