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this novel is mid asf. cliche story, the side characters doesn't have a brain. and the conversations between characters are very cringy and unhumanlike, and unnatural, i don't get how you don't see that something is strange with the conversations, i mean you're a human, right? or maybe you never talked to someone in your life? it's just straight up stupid, it's like the conversations were written by 9 yo. the conversations are so bad, it felt strange, lifeless and bland. well, i just read all the free chaps, maybe it'll get better.
Till now book is pretty good. After reading "my lovely fate companion"I was searching a similar book in which mc and fmc love each other pretty much yandere couple and it meet my expectations. hoping for some mass releases.
At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience.Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read.All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
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