Okay hear me out but Agent Wave is hot! He's so my type *Squeal**** If only I could be Hira Callan I would **sings that should be me by Justine bieber**
first 20 chapters were pretty Boeing after that ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
the biggest problem the story has is things that happen off screen. information is obtained, system ui is explored, and abilities are obtained without any reader knowledge.The entire digital realm and what that means is ignored entirely, acting the same as a system-magic transmigration to another atom-based world.the final major problem I can think of is that mc has changed class three times already and I have no idea what that means, if it means anything.the above being said, it's a fun story with developed characters that are different from each other and interact in funny and interesting ways. character growth may be abrupt, but it's better than stagnant characters.
Just like what another reviewer said, this story feels rushed and there is minimal characterization here. The MC is like an AI who just acts for sake of progressing the story. He does not have any defining trait aside from his cheat. He currently has no goal because he had already achieved it (becoming a warrior), and he doesn't seem to have any strong reasons for becoming strong as well, he just trains, maybe so that he would be able to save damsels in need. The world seem safe enough after all.
Really good so far. Well done author! Keep writing and keep posting. Don't give up. Will be waiting for you to post more chapters! Keep up the good work!
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