This is an action/murder series in which a Chinese man is reincarnated as a Caucasian Texan kid in an alternate universe. The title and synopsis are very misleading. Although "detective" is in the name, the MC has not done any investigative work at all. THIS IS NOT A MYSTERY SERIES AT ALL. On the contrary, he becomes a police officer and goes around killing people with excessive brutality. Despite this, he hasn't even been investigated, suspended, or arrested for his crimes.Aside from his system, there are no super powers or supernatural elements at all prior to the series going premium.There is ample racism, sexism, and nationalism from the main character. Women are weak, even if they're police officers and have not demonstrated any kinds of weakness. The Chinese always do things better and are more sensible. Why didn't the author just reincarnate him as a Chinese American, then? There are plenty of Asian people here. This is very off-putting and distracting from the plot.The MC himself is a Gary Stu with great grades, great looks, and great abs. Although he becomes excessively violent and even executes criminals who are incapacitated, there are no legal repercussions, and he's never risked being removed from the force. Is he even human? He feels no guilt, hesitation, or remorse after killing people. He is interested in his system and is savage, but he otherwise doesn't have any emotions. No bitterness, no sorrow, no regrets, no lust, no nothing. His morality is highly questionable, too. Although he has a girlfriend he likes, he wants to replace her with a better girlfriend or even develop a harem; later, he has no interest in dating, so his personality is inconsistent in this regard. His intelligence is clearly only average, and this has left many readers facepalming in the comments, including myself.Weirdly enough, although he was already thirty years old in his past life, he doesn't appear to have any life experiences or to reflect on his past at all. Most people would plan things different a second time in life, but he really doesn't have any interest. It feels like his past as a Chinese man only exists to give him the excuse to continue with making hurtful prejudiced comments. I'm not sure what the point is.It's also pretty bizarre that his system doesn't punish him for breaking the law or murdering people. It's as though it was designed to make a super criminal rather than a hero, and it's abundantly obvious it's not made for a detective at this point since intelligence doesn't count for anything.There is some characterization of other characters, but the story doesn't give them much depth before going premium.If you are looking for another casual action/killing type of series, then you might enjoy this. If you are looking for actual mysteries, detectives, investigation of any kind, or super powers, this series does not have any of them prior to premium. I'm not going to bother paying premium here, and I don't recommend it for others either.
Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentence construction is also not great. So 2 for Writing quality.Not sure about the updating stability as I don't follow the novel...Look as far as the novel goes apart from the writing, is very avarege. The OCs are mostly generic and the mc is basically templated. I feel like there also some developments wich are unlikely but that can be glossed over by this just being a fantasy novel of that style and the world is obviously so that's still good even though there issue's when comparing the logic of characters and their abilities to the original world.
Read till Chapter 85Words cant express the greatness of this novel (i dont know how to write reviews)MC is an nascent soul stage expert and is one of the powerhouses in his kingdom His system lets him advance in his cultivation as his apprentices reach higher realm OH IMPORTANT POINT the mc still cultivates normally even though he has a system Our MC also has a mysterious background as his memories area hazy Yea yea i know my review is bad just give this novel a shot and i am sure you i will love it
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please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
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This is a gem in the 'rent-a-friend' genre that brings a smile to your face with a clever set up and loveable characters.The general writing quality is extremely high, and personally I enjoyed the style quite a bit, barring some space for polishing.Time is spent in the early chapters building up the character of Leo, though some of the scenes chosen for character building might feel a little inconseuquential, which the author understandably has to walk a fine line between slice of life stories and log of everything that happens to one's day.Speaking which, the pacing does remind me of the pacing of the first fate visual novel, where we start the story with one character then cut the perspective away and follow another for the next few chapters until they meet again.Keep at it!
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