Forbidden Desires: A Targaryen Tale

I enjoy this story very much, however, there are two points that stick out to me. First, Lyra's characterization.Even in the prologue, when you think about it, the author described Lyra, or Reinst at the time as calm or serious. Yet, her thought process was anything but that. Her thought process had a tehe~ kind of tone which seemed very unsuited for how she was described.After reincarnation, her characterization didn't seem to click exactly. Even if she is a child, or is to show more childlike behaviour, she should still show signs of her past life traits other than knowledge Second, the addition of modern technology and entertainment. I mean, it's nice to blend science and magic, but this wasn't blended particularly well...With science, they mention stem cell donation. However, they mention no other scientific achievements or tools? What? Maybe my memory is bad or I missed it, but are there really no other achievements in science? It doesn't even need to be stated outright, they could just be using a scientific tool or something. Also, they mentioned there being anime, manga and light novels or something of similar content. Yet it isn't even mentioned or implied that others read/watch them. It seems as though their only purpose is to make references and jokes that would resonate with the readers. This causes it to seem like and isekai, while it isn't really and isekai.In short, the lack of attention the science receives causes the background to seem somewhat careless and unplanned.However, it is a good story with good plot, despite its flaws. I've read up to pretty much the latest chapter, so I know.It's just that these problems bother me quite a bit, do I decided to leave a review.So, in case you do write a second book, please keep in mind the inner workings of one's mind. Because seriously, the way you characterized Reinst/Lyra, they really shouldn't be acting that way.