Oh my god, the story is so good. I am loving the characters. Everyone has their own attractive personality. The moment of marriage is emotional now I'm excited to read their romance.
This novel irritated me so much. The author has to remind me non stop that the MC is by no means talented and comes from a common family etc.And no matter how many incredible power ups the MC gets, his friends etc always stay around his power level because plot armor. Also the MC is incredible dense, for god sake.. when you are 13-15 years old you do know whats going on between men and woman. Also, half of the story is filled with chapters about the MC eating so much and people reacting crazy to it + every fight there has to be paragraphs of golden dragon body transformation and dragon roar descriptions... It's just boring to be honest.There is a lot more irritating stuff like the stupid blacksmith chapters that are all more or less the same about him hammering alloys and shocking people about his young age and blacksmith star level. TLDR: This story got massive plot armor with a dense MC and lots of repetitive writing. Boring side characters who all have there secrets and author reminds you of those things all the time but it takes hundreds if not thousands of chapters and hundreds of author reminders before you get an explanation.
Read all chapters because of the limit free stuff and boy was this bad. Author can’t seem to choose between op mc and balanced mc and switches between these two ideas constantly.
Really interesting concepts and set up.Seems like the story has a few too many ideas that are kinda competing with one another while trying to establish what the plot will be about. I keeps things interesting but also a little unfocused. I feel like the pacing goes a tad too fast at times with too many characters being introduced, too many things happening, and too many rules about how this world works being established one after another.Probably my advice would be trying to espace out the events a bit and focus more on smaller things like character detail. We get things like time travel, aliens, people coming back from the dead, robbery... But I find it hard to get invested cause I feel like I know so little about these people. The dialog also doesn't help. Everyone talks so much but it's mostly exposition explaining what's going on and what they're doing. Dialogs that sometimes go on for gigantic paragraphs. Meanwhile, the actual events like kidnapping a baby only last for a short while. I feel there is a need for people to say less and do more, and allow the reader to learn more from those actions .
Nice just a good start just waiting for a next story how fastvu can please update 1st as it can be😍😍waiting!waiting..waiting for urbnext suspension part please
I am of course going to rate the book of my friends book high but not perfect. They have a lot to improve on and would like to hear feedback that is not just criticism but constructive criticism and advice.
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