Very unique and interesting reincarnation story that I hope the author takes in a good direction. Interesting even though so far it’s just a rock going around on a Hadean era-esque planet. Really hope that once the author moves in and gets their stuff set up they can update this regularly. 4/5 Definitely recommend
Short summary of what I think so far.. horrible translation, no world background, can't tell when its the system or character talking even the conversations and actions are poorly written. So far just from the first 15 chapters you can tell its a dull story with little to no description, I wouldn't recommend.
It's a good novel, the story is very interesting, but I feel that even though it's a double cultivation novel, it has a lot of lemons, so much so that it makes the plot stand a little still, I think that even in this type of novel there must be a consensus between the plot progression and the lemons
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Warnings on the intro were good. I think it's needed because of using third party to publish. Story is good, i couldn't measure the updating frequency, they all have been released in same day. keep going on to write.
On the other side, after the small battle was over, Yu Long proceeded slowly into the forest to find a place to rest and recover. As he traced his path into the forest he made sure to make the minimal sound possible to avoid attracting more trouble. He couldn't control his breathing as he kept gasping for air once in a while. He pulled his body as far as he could until he found it necessary to lookout for a place to rest. He looked around, he found a small burrow by a giant tree. He knew it wasn't safe staying at one place because he could be attacked by anybody anytime. He also got separated from FeiMei and BaoLi and needed to search for them as well. But all he could do was rest for now. He dragged himself to the burrow. He looked in the dark deep burrow. It was dark inside to investigate so he created a small fire using the spiritual energy left with him. He could let it create much smoke as it would attract attention. He knew he was in a vulnerable state now and couldn't take on any opponent. After inspecting the burrow and finding it unoccupied, he tried to sit there against the earthen walls of the dwelling.
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