First rejected now wanted

Rejection should not make us lose focus. They will always come looking for you if you don't give up. Thanks author

this book needs to be proof read. the plot is all over the place.

This book is incredible hard to read.  It has a lot of repetition nonsense.  I’m sue a lot is lost in translation. It has an interesting plot but it’s not worth the nonsense.

I LOVED this book. Yes some errors but nothing that you really couldn’t understand.

liked the book. kept me reading till the end

21 chapters 5,/19

The plot is decent but it is very difficult to read. It contains a lot of repetitiveness and excessive nonsense. I’m giving up after 16 chapters.  It definitely needs a revision.

First rejected now wanted. The story line is interesting i made it up to chapter 20 and that was hard. Because the writer is either very young or their first language is not English.  I had to quit. Maybe get a proofreader