Fell in love with a Killer

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"Give me information and I'll let whatever's left of your kingdom alone."

'At least my secret is safe... for now.'

"This one's no good either…"

"Hmm...I'll help, I have nothing to do so I'm free." Lilly spoke wrapping her arms gently around Dante's neck.

I looked back at Naruko and saw her wink at me  before fighting the rest