A beautiful story. I've only red the first two chapters and mostly i think what i love the most is the bond between Rina and her mum ❤️.
Although I have to say, it would have suited much better if you detailed her description slowly while telling the story instead of stating it out plainly. ?
Wtf? Does the guy she met in chapter 8 become the ml and lover? I mean , , when you grow a little fatter come and warm my bed" is that our ml niveau? Disgusting 🤢🤮 and why dont we see her thoughts in such a situation :/
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Although I have to say, it would have suited much better if you detailed her description slowly while telling the story instead of stating it out plainly. ?