Fallen Lands

On this first try, he simply created a portal a few miles above his Earth's atmosphere. So when he emerged on the other side he was in the middle of the enemy ships that are maintaining orbit.

Well that was confusing

He gave a look of relief, but quickly raised his guard when he heard palms coming from the door through which he entered. It was a little girl, who looked about ten years old and dressed like a little princess.

They both swore to be with each other.

A slow start but a well desreved start Author is introducing things so it’s starting slow introducing but i can feel there is something going on

Author pls change the cover  .