Fairy Tails Strongest

i was very  fond of Noelle. b7t i hate this noelle. she shows thst she doesnt like Cjristian but avtually she is enjoying his kisses  then why this drama?

it's a pit the author abandoned the story that now says completed. It was an interesting story about an apocalypse, and different from the author previous stories (that all sound quite similar). Hope it gets a second chance and the author starts writing it again.

So first off, the writing quality is fine, there is not too much problem with that, the updating quality is very good, tough the size of each chapter is small, so I think you should publish 1 chapter out of two or three small ones. The story development, as for now nothing has had really happened, the protagonist just stayed in his village training and writing, so I expect a quick development of it's quality, what you must do is not make it really fast forward nor too slow, just find the right amount, try get our interest with something like a tension.About the characters names now, don't just put a bit of every anime and make it a story, for example I don't think you should have named the protagonist Roronoa Zoro, it's just sound like someone who is obsessed with that character, same for Artoria, besides what are the chances of a Japanese to be named (with both the family name and the first name) like someone from Europe or Mexico.Then about the paragraph's space, don't make a huge thing, it's very easy to get lost.Finally about the world background, very poor for now so you should really work it from now on.

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Hi I just want to ask before I start reading this will there be ntr? I've read from other reviews that mc's women gets grope

this is my first time to make a review about this novel becaus I find it interesting way and its Filipino point of view not in Chinese I'm sorry if you are a half Chinese and half Filipino something like that..the sentence that make 3rd person view is really awkward becaus I don't know if the mc or the narrator is speaking or thinking I find it difficult to me read that all and I full support of this novel and author too

Really like it, probably one of the best I have seen in trial read, very realistic too and it gives an explanation for everything instead of just saying "it works because it's magic"

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