Surprise surprise, the MC ruins the novel. Shocking right? This guy lacks common sense, doesn't know how to communicate, and just lost in his own world.It's like having all of Legoland all to yourself but the only thing you create from it is a basic one story, one room house with a flat roof with all of the brick masters standing there waiting for you to ask them questions.Verdict: Dropped
ok here is an honest review and i personally think that your story is great for your first time and i find your MC really interesting . Keep it up n good luck
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As I was walking I approached one of the piles of rocks, except they weren't rocks. Looking at it, it was a pile of shit. It was one of the worst things I've smelt along my not to long journey. running away from this soul destroying stench, I made my way toward the mountain.
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