Wow. I like how you started this novel! Amazing work! I'd rarely read an ML book, but the details you gave in the starting scene was so vivid. Even I'm not good at vivid scenes. I couldn't stop reading. Even though it was a fighting scene, I liked it very much. Very good author. I'd continue to read the novel. Please update!
Nice plot with a good background I also like how the characters were described and how detailed the story is.The suspension and mystery is very good here.
I have read some chapters, and this story is great, the mc and the idea is just perfect. Keep going because this book has potential I do have some suggestions, since there is some flaws.
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"I leave for a few minutes and you guys are already fighting? I hope you guys don't do this in the city, I'd hate to waste our new source of income for anything damaged." Simon said before he turned around to face the humanoid yellow dragon.
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