After chunnin exams let him take a 3 year break, let sandaime live, let Naruto say he needs a break from Konoha, as he can think better after the exam and can think clearly let him realise he was out of line far too emotional.Ask for a three year training retreat, let him learn summons, and it would be convenient if he found tsunade, she has a connection to his mother, and let Naruto open up for seeing so e of his burden along with her becoming a viable to return to Konoha, when Naruto explains what's been going on, she will return to make Konoha better, and maybe let the sandaime retire, and her take over, and she'll be aware of Danzo. And this letnaruto strengthen his body physically and having he did knowledge, and with that, understanding his body and finding a zenjutsu pathway, and his ems, let himtrainit to susanoo before the 6 paths. Let him learn a lot inthis three years, briefly go over his encounters, but being out of the village it will help his emotional stability, and experience, so thst he is stronger and ready to return. I'd be happy if sakura died. And this lets sasuke come back down fro his high horse. And takes a page out of Naruto book to learn for himself instead of relying on others, so he can get stronger, and help his character help him realise all thathehas. So when Naruto returns he will be of sage strength and going up. And learning things inbijuu mode, but allow hi to face his dark side. And with the bijuu mode, at him be able to use yin yang and 9 forms of nature chakra. Which that will be difficult with learning other things, but let him take a break from Konoha. Let him get an epic summon. Like super rare dragons. Or Phoenix. Hopefully fox. Let him emotionally develop, since it feels like it's stunted, and he closeshimself off to truly survive, let him understand fully what the village puts h I'm through ways he wants to I prove it let tsunade help him with his emotional baggage and he can help her. This will help him develop into a young ***** properly IMO.
Okay so as of now I really like the story and the fact that I have no idea how it will turn out. The reason for this is that there are two sides of this story both being writen st the same time which makes it both a fun foa and read, but also a well thought out novel even if you donβt include the lewd portions in it.
A book has great potential. But some parts feel stiff.And pacing is good but it could be better, Other than that the world building is amazing.The characters are developed well, the party was flesh out just in 5 chapters.
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