Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.
Nice concept, I like it.Everything is fine I guess, but I have some thoughts about where is the 'magic concept' I thought the MC will have something like fire ball skill, lighting skill, or something like that, so he can use it for do something lewd.
All good and amazing at mortal world arc but all thing got hectic once MC went to immortal civilization. The story got more incoherent with previous chapters. This kept happening for hundreds of chapters. No explaining on how and what got him on some situation that you have to backtrack some chapters still confusing how they connects to ongoing storyline. Its still worth reading mortal world arc for those who are interested if they have no other novel to read they find interesting
I hear they hold hands in this book. So lewd. I could never read something like that. but, if you are not against that... read on. I hear there are more lewd things to come.
I rarely play a game of this genre. But the story idea is quite interesting and easy to follow. Author can explain any detail in a good way so that someone as newbie as me can enjoy the game.Sometimes it reminds me of COC hahaha.Anyway, I would love to recommend this book to you guys, please read and give it a try.
Love this kind of stories and the characters were hilarious in the middle of the zombie apocalypse, although I suggest using grammarly to improve the grammar mistakes, and use capitalized letter at the start of a paragraph. Some of it were already good, keep up the good work! and also good luck on the contest!
Hiii Nanakawaichan, I just came across The Incubus System not long ago and it really caught my eye🥺! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️🫂
"Why the gloomy face? It's not like it was your fault. If anyone should be blamed for the war, it should be the Royal Family of Krantz. They started the meaningless war."
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