Eternal Flame: Taming My Human Husband

BUT i found something interesting in his computer a fanfiction he did i don't know when about a reincarnated being in naruto i read a little and it was interesting ...

He's a late 3rd year transferee student.

Bhumi was stunned, and so was everyone else.

Xyrus:walang mangyayaring masama doon mommy..tsss... baka nga siya pa ang gumawa ng masama kasi halimaw siya

"Well, she's not wrong on that either.'

1st Platoon headed straight for the officers' quarters, catching the Imperial Officers off-guard. They were barely able to grab a pistol when the platoon came knocking at their door. 1st Platoon actually looked like a firing squad when they attacked the officers' quarters.

I need to get myself away from this place

The author does a good job of plunging the MC into a quick paced situation, letting the readers quickly immerse themselves in the world.It has an interesting plot and a good integration of a system that allows the main character to progress.With improvements to the overall writing quality, I think the story could easily be rated higher. I hope that is the case going forward because I like the premise of the story.Overall, well done author. All that’s mainly required are some touch ups on the writing to make it cleaner and flow smoothly.

It's a 5.0 the plot twist was extremely good. excited for the next chapters. keep it up author👏👏

This is good stuff honestly, 👍 I kinda like bruce 😂😂, but the character development and the world building are kinda moving at different speeds but that's okay, I'll like to see the how it plays out later on