Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?

I have read only two chapters and already added it to my library! 😁😁 It's really amazing. I can't believe that's it is an original. WOW! 😱😱 And the length of the chapters are perfect. Neither too small nor too long, just perfect. I love it. I am also an author, writing a novel in this section by the name of, "The Journey To An Unknown Destination." And I have just started to write it. That is why I am really impressed that it's not easy to come up with an idea and then write it down so beautifully...,😊😁😁But I just love this one!!! 👍👍👍👌👌👌

I've read up to chapter 100 and so far the story has been great and i feel very invested in this story. so good novel imou200eu200fu200fu200e u200eu200fu200fu200e u200eu200fu200fu200e u200eu200fu200fu200e u200e

This is a great book. I've read until chapter 7 and I love every part of it. The only issue that I've had is the whole 'info dump'. It's been sort of frustrating to read through all of this information in a span of only a few chapters and it's also demotivating. My advice for the author is to try to spread out all of the information so it's easier for readers to absorb the information. But, this is also a difficult skill to use as, in my opinion, it requires experience. Other than that, I've enjoyed the book.

this novel is amazing overall it has an amazing storyline with great characters to go along with it and the way it plays out makes you wanna know what will happen next in total I suggest you read this.

The story is Relatively Good. The Quality is also ok even if Grammar is a bit of a problem here and there. One of the best parts of the story are the Characters. They are multidimensional in the emotional department. Update and world background is also ok. Biggest Criticism I can give is the story Development and the early ch. The Early 40 ch. are for a lack of a better word boring and borderline terrible, i don't need 40 ch. where I read that the MC is weak. 10 would have been enough, it's to drawn out. The story Development is generic, most plotlines are kind of cliche, it's hard to write something Original and come up with a complete new plot but the story Development kinda dregs the Characters down. It's not bad, far from it but like I said it's kinda generic. After the first 40 ch. it get much better, so I would advise everyone to at least read the free ch. 3.8/5

There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :)Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect.Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have.You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what.Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo!World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition.In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)

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❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Errmmm what should I even write. Everyone knows I'm bad at giving reviews.lolFirst of all, I love the story. Reading it made me remember all the good times I had there.🤗I learned a lot though. The gr8 Nixxie advised me and I couldn't be more grateful.❤I realized that all those big authors we see aren't rude and they're really nice people.Secondly, you must read it!!!! I mean why not. Don't you want to know what your fav. Author is like behind close doors??🙃Lastly, A cute girl like me is in how can you not read huh?🤔🙄Lol. Don't forget to support the author tho😍😘