One Of the best novel that i read, My preferences of novel is one with an op mc, so this fit's perfect with my preferences,But the storyline kinda repeat itself, you can improve on that :D
The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.
Good novel just a little fast pased can I slow according to me for the three girls it should at least take up to 120 to150 chapters and please upload more chapters please 🙏🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊😊🙏🙏
5/5 d(=^・ω・^=)bWow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^・ω・^=)丿Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ)I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^・ω・^=)v
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