Emperor Royal Highness Enchanting

Good writing! Well thought out, but was a bit confused on the setting in the first ten chapters, was really confused on the multiple POV.First novel I read where you get the POV of a system. Overall would rate 3.8, but I round it up. To 4Keep it up author!

"O-oh, yeah that's no trouble" Chen yuan was panicking hard to the point that he hyperventilated and passed out. Chen yuan was taken by the two Japanese soldier.

[Devil- Fruit: Type Paramecia ]

In a private room of the famous Hearts restaurant was filled with laughter, a woman with long black shiny hair and a tan skin sat, her oval shaped face glistened under the bright light in the room, she sat facing a man who was also very good looking and vibrant, they were clearly having a good time as only laughter was heard.

Many servant wonder who is that lucky person that can taste their Young Lady's handmade food . Lisa done her cooking and at the same time Jennie also has been arriving. Jennie's really amaze with Lisa's place because it is very huge . Jennie walks inside the house shyly . Lisa heard the sound of the car so she knows that Jennie is already arrived she rushed to go outside the kitchen and come to get Jennie to her dinning room  . She pulls Jennie's hand to her dinning room . She pulls a chair for Jennie and give a bowl full of ramen to Jennie . Jennie was a bit sad and confused because the food that she was predicting about turn out to be Ramen only . Lisa smiles at Jennie and saw Jennie isn't really satisfied with it then she asked Jennie .

In the past, he murdered only under the orders of Du Zhengxian and now he had a sudden impulse to strangle this demon, Du Yingxuan, on the spot.

as i started walking i noticed the building i was looking for

Shao Fan waited for a minute...10 minutes...40 minutes. 2 hours... and he gave up. He silently cursed his luck and picked up the 'Guide to being a System' book again and flipped it open, revealing the first page.

"We waited for a chance and made sure that Johny Joestar would NOT be coming back home, we also did our best to limit the contact between the Joestars and Ciel, but I fear it might not be enough anymore, maybe, maybe it is not enough anymore to stop that boy with what we did." She said, making my head spin.

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

"Mr. Dark contacted you, sir," Lilith answered.

I like how it went so far, expeionaly the kidnapping part, but everything was very interesting, and that's what I like about it 10/10 love how you did the writing and everything