Your writing is beautiful.I look forward to your writing.I wish I could write like you.You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it.Your writing inspires me.I falling in love with your novel,i hope can read it everytime,i hope you writing this novel to the end and goodjob and thank you for your hardworking to finishing all chapter.....
I've read till chapter 5 or 6, and I dislike the way it's going. But that's not the problem. The problem is, the writing just feels strange. I'm not a native english speaker so I'm unable to spot the reason, but it disturbs me so much that I'm unable to read it anymore. Still, try it out, everyone has differnet tastes
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The enemy had begun to react to their movement. They split their ranks off to welcome to oncoming Ørkadian reinforcements. They had a sizeable force. They outnumbered the Ørkadians, though not by much. The numerical supremacy of the enemy would be rendered useless once Pyrelig's men attacked from the rear. The burgh itself looked to be in bad shape. Sections of the palisade were hacked into splinters or burning gently. There were arrows pierced into the wooden frames of the buildings within. On the rampart he could see more than a few corpses dangling over the side slight.y the first casualties of this battle. There was nothing Brenjulf could have done to prevent it, but he truly wished he could have.
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