This is my first review.OK where do I start from...... hmmmm.Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point.I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy. There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better. The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.
If you ever wanted to continue this, wnmtl.org has a good machine translation of this book, It just has a few incorrect terms n misgenders the mc a lil bit
Me alegra que por fin volvieras, por favor no vayas a abandonar la novela, es muy buena, gran trabajo.Es una historia increíble.Alabadas sean las Yanderes.
'Damn... they went from being a few level sevens to becoming level nines in less than a month! There are even two half-step Manifestation realms among them. That's just terrifying!
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