El Alfa Rompió mi Corazón

Seriously. I was really enjoying this novel at first. But when you see the sane thing over and over and over again. It gets a bit boring. The plot progression is sooo slow even a snail moves faster than it. Author spends time mostly on irrelevanf stuff and stuff that actually matters gets skipped over. Am in chapter 200 and i havent seen any plot progression from chapter 50, it just reading d same **** over and over again. MC fights in virtual reality, MC wins, MC solves some science ****, he is a genius we get it, can we move on to the actual plot now, u said something about rebuilding an empire and nothing in the plot that has happened so far has even mentioned that instead they focus on irrelevant stuff like background characters we dont give two **** about. Seriously, start writing something that actually contributes to the plot and not something repetitive and boring

Its an okay story. A bit all over the place at the start and needs a lot more chapters before becoming great. The world building is kind of slow as so far it has a lot of main characters rather then just one. Right now the story is building up the main guys and building the world on the side. It has still left some questions but just enough pieces for us to figure it out on our own. Its not bad but right now this story is just a 3. Not the worst but there is probably something better out there. Who knows though. My ratings may change. This story is only 4 chapters after all.

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Another half axx novel.My expectations is pretty low for any trial novel on this platform nowadays........................................

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I have so much to say but I'll keep it short.The main hooking point of the story for me is the softcore romance between the ml and fl.apart from that, the story doesn't start away from the main plot (revolving around mc and Valerie). Rather it branches out from there; which I think is a plus.The narration is better than the most, making it both immersive without unnecessary fancy words.The story gives exactly what it sells from the title and synopsis..give it a read!