Why is this 4.8 still? This needs to be 5 asap! The narration of the story and characters are just hilarious, some of it because it's so ridiculous.You won't be able to stop chuckling. Yes this is ridiculously hilarious and hilariously ridiculous.
I really cant understand how its possible for this novel to achieve a raiting like that.I mean are all the people that are putting a raiting out there even reading the same novel i am or have they even read half of it?Now let me start with my honest and (as far as possible) objective opinion.First of all even after all the harsh things i did say so far im not saying that this novel doest deserve any attention as the story in itself is pretty enjoyable to read. Otherwise i would not have read it for more than 1400 chapters. The thing is im not willing to put a 4-5 star raiting out there for any n novelovel that doesnt make my eyes start to bleed. As you can see i dont have anything to criticize about writing and update quality. The world background is also pretty good in my opinion. The big problem is the story developement and chatacters which in my opinion are the most important parts about a novel. The thing is the problems here are not easy to ignore.The author pretty much create a new stage for the mc every arc and discardes it completely afterwards. Items, abilitys people he met are completely forgotten a few chapters after first mentioning them.The timetable doesnt make any sense either at some points and important aspect of the story are just ignored from one moment to another. Sometime its like reading one filler after another without context between them. Obviously some "forgotten" things are easier to ignore than others but its definitely bad writing either way. The author just creates too many loose ends and doesnt bother about connecting them afterwards.Some examples with spoilers:•The bow he could only draw up to 10% because he was to weak will probavly never be drawn further because its never mentioned before.•The evil energy + demon puppet just disappeared•His totem and all about it•His avatar•the fact that xinton got first in that ancient battlefield 60 years ago. How the fuck should that be even possible if protagonist is struggling for survival (as always) even now?•and my personal favorite the cultivation supression while beeing inside that ancient battlefield. Progressing only in story because of that supression and few chapters later its suddenly gone without giving a fuck.These are probably not all the problems but definitely the most annoying for me. It might also be possible for me being wrong about some of the mentioned things but all in all a novel with problems at its core should be at a 3.something raiting as a good read while being bored and not 4-5 as there are enough outstanding novels that dont get anny attention.Btw im not a native eng speaker so im sorry for butchering the language here and there.
PLEASE LEARN REAL ENGLISH, its like I am reading a story translates by a 5 year old. You suck at translating. Either take some fucking grammar classes, OR never translate again.
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Hey just wanna say ive been waiting for taming/per novel for a while. i have to say i like what ive seen. The only thing lacking is a sense of urgency but i guess thatll come later after all the first interactions and character presentations is over with. (Up to Ch.4). Keep it going.
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