it feels like the novel is being held back greatly by the horrible grammar and I mean greatly. the conversations are so out of touch it makes my head hurt and you don't even know the difference between what they're thinking or saying, its all just mixed up in there
Counter balance for other review..Anyway, the synopsis seems like it will be a fun read.. Although I can't shake the feeling that I had read this before... Hurm, maybe in mtl?
This is my first web novel and so far its very good, i am only on chapter 46 but i really like it. I got recomended to read this thru TikTok and i am glad i was
Like many other reviews have said at firdt this story was pretty enjoyable to read, but then the characters were introduced and it went downhill from their. Heroine 1 falls with MC for no real reason, author has a terrible memory when it comes to any numbers an example is the earlier chapters MC "sells" 2 serums for 50K each and also gets a 100M. Then he goes to buy a bunch of gear worth over 200M, but luckily the MC had a 50% discount so he got it for little over 100M which he forgot about. Story progression was ok at first but then it went downhill from their. Also the r18 are super weird heres an example, MC is banging heroine 1 as heroine 2 is given aphrodisiac and attacked with the intention of rape from generic bad guy 1. Throughout the process of that happening which last about 5 or so chapters. He just keeps on banging heroine 1... I'm just going to stop myself their and not go on a rant, even though I already have.Bye
Sigh! I still haven't figured out how to increase my level other than doing that daily mission, giving me 50 exp. I need to find a more efficient way to increase my stats, grinding fairytale and children book is getting more useless. I need more novels like this.
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