The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.
This book keeps getting better and better I canβt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iβll be able to read it thank you very much ππππππππππππ
Her indignation made Kit smile. "He has a great way of putting things." she said. "As if we didn't hunt the house high and low for a letter from the poor mistress."
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