Dragon Ball Z: Futuristic Anamoly

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It’s pretty good 😊. But one question… golden immortal and others are not in that rank page. Soo… maybe an update on that. Thanks

I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style.While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book."Isaac likes to sing.he enjoys it.Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't.Alice likes her elder brother."Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences

Another story that's hard to read, with another idiotic and pathetic MC, no backbone and the story said he was intelligent and had the best grades and such, but he just seems like a moron, so conflicting,whoever wrote this should pay attention to what there writing, how do you not realize how conflicting your story your writing is, its actually sad really.

does not do justice to original novel, translations are all over the place, and is very abrupt. takes a while to actually understand what’s going on, but once you finally understand the story, it’s not bad.

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Maybe this is too early for a review since there is only one chapter. But this story definitely have potential. I will keep reading and keep the spirits high author.

Amazing novel. Ruthless Mc, great fights and overall good plot/world building.