Después de que todo le fuera arrebatado, ella regresa como una diosa

So far im really enjoying this, keep up the good work, love both the story and premise just maybe clean up the "status" and especially "quest" screens a bit

Me personally, I love systems as they bring you into the video game-like world and takes you away from reality. As of chapter for it's been a good read with a likable male lead. Certainly a story for one to kick back on a Friday afternoon and enjoy. I'll update more as I read more but so far, keep up the great work, writer!

I read this in royal road the first few chap but stopped because of too few chap and hoping for a binge read haha but I kInda forgot it same with your other original story ... just yesterday I found your story and finally remember it and read it in one go .. Damm boy that was so cool I wanna be Mr.Skeletal too 😛😛 then I just casually click on your profile and see this being posted on here too but it seems there's doesn't that much chap though 😞😞😞 anyways wish me luck I'm pulling and all nighter 😂

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This needs alot of work but for a first write I think it is ok but it definitely needs work and maybe needs more detail and re wrote with better things

If you came here for a JP-like fluffy, comedy, slice-of-life novel about a random dude living with a hot elf, then look no further, cause that's exactly what you'll get....... for a couple of chapters - and then it'll go all in on grim-dark despair.Overall, Elf-story (shortform for this novel's long ass title), is really well written. It has good humor, narration, exposition, pacing, witty dialogue, and multi-dimensional characters with fleshed out backgrounds. So, all's well that ends well? Unfortunately, and this is my personal opinion, the story just got too dark too quickly - and theres too much of it without any sunshine (read:fluff/romance/light heartedness/happy moments/etc). This, combined with a beta, spineless, and indecisive MC (who we never get to know the name of), simply began to annoy me more and more. I came here for a fluffy elf-chan comedy story, then I was pleasantly surprised with deeper and darker plot, but then it became tedious reading about a never evolving relationship, pitifully spineless MC, and constant dark-upon-dark developments, where the story is going from one crisis to another.I hope that in the future plot can include some more romance, where Ash (elf-chan) and MC kiss, make up, do gf+bf stuff - and no, don't tear them apart with some stupid deus-ex machina plot machinations the next chapter to prove their love or some other random bullshit reasoning. Keep them together, and have them develop together for the fluff in the dark.In short, fluff is good, but lately too much dark and crisis combined with a constantly spineless MC is becoming tedious to read.

"Isn't it obvious? Looking at the way they treat you, I already know just how much they care about you. Don't you think so?" Aoi said again with a you-are-stupid-if-you-don't-know-that tone hidden in his voice.