Desperate Love [BL]

I really enjoyed reading this story of Kate & William. The way it ended did feel rushed bc so much had happened & yet it was wrapped up too perfunctorily. The story could've had a few more chapters providing explanations re: Cordelia, Paris & Jax's relationship with Kate. More on K&W's life 2-gether

Short chapters.. Unique idea.. Original.. Readable english.. Minor typographical but negligible mistakes.. Definitely, a class of its own..............

The is average, which is to say better than 95% of what you will find in this site. Very much reminiscent of coiling dragon Standard story with MC waking up in different world with a system. The good stuff first : the MC is not stupid.  He doesn't have much of a personality but he is also not doing dumb things because of a hero complex. Also the system. Great implementation of the concept.  It's only a tool that increases stats.  No quest windows. No dimensional shops. No guiding voice.   The system is a system, not a character. Now the dad : The MC doesn't invent anything new. It's the kind of story where he follows an inheritance from one person and when it reaches to limit  he moves on to the next higher level inheritance. Also the system. At the beginning he spends some time cultivating on his own. Increasing his stats just like any other person. But at some point the author just decided that doing it the conventional way is for loosers, and had the MC just buy all the stats he needed to reach higher levels. Also major negative.  The peanut gallery is just annoying. The amount of time spent on how it's impressive that he is only 16 years old is fricking absurd. I know that authors are paid by the world count , but like there are numbers other than 16.  17 being one of them. Just have him age a year!!!!

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"Thank you for keeping me accompany, I really need that sleep, can't sleep at all last night."

Anna hands  get trough to Harry blonde hair. his hair feels soft and a little bit wet. She likes the taste off Harry lips. Never knew a man lips can be that sweet and strong addictive to her. she wanted more and more from Hary lips.  

At once, their eyes meet. Walang pasubaling nanlisik ang mga ni Cody saying...