Descent into Damnation

nice oneee

Dropped hardPositive: Translated very well. Just minor grammar mistakes- Background/secondary characters are more relatable then the MC (except the usual Novel 'enemies' who's IQ dropped like a rock)- 'Pokemon' fight scene is nicely written- The story has a nice flow and you can really understand and follow the story... ish. Has a nice idea but horrible execution. Explanation and reasoning bellow. ________________Negative: MC and the system and authors brain- MC in the beginning still behaves like a normal person who was transported to a new world. Good reasoning to try and repair relationship with sibling cause original Persona of the body was a dick.Suddenly System appears and story goes stupid.- Mix Pavlov + Stockholm Syndrome + Dumb author ideas/interpretation of a relationship.- system threatens MC with punishment if MC can't accomplish Quest/Mission. These with literal Torture (lighting that was triggered) or promise of Oblivion (erase Memories and deletions)- MC, under pressure, must train a rat where they both can die infinately but both experience how they died.MC trains rat among super monsters that the rat constantly dies. And when rat feels tired after fighting and beating a monster, MC kills rat to safe time cause when rat is reborn it's fully energetic again.- afterwards owner of rat comes to collect the rat and suddenly MC is totally emotionally attached to rat and gets angry/jealous why rat jumps for joy to the nonviolent pet owner.Story has nothing to do with Pet Store after a while. It's all about the food and training pet for others. Nothing about being a pet shop owner and it's development. Personal not sure if Author even knows what it's like have a pet.

This is just trash.Not worth reading...

Pretty good, definitely recommend got a good story so far and like how the Mc knowns his end goal. And I know for a fact the thing that gonna be attractive about this is the Aventuresufffcufffcufffcufffcufffcufffcufffc

Haven't read all the chapters yet but then again I pretty much fell in love with the story within the first five chaps or so anyway. Beautifully written, poignant and sweet. And an absolutely fantastic sense of humour!

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" Hey brother, calm down. I'm saving you then you would act like this? Are you still sane? " Silver looked at the warrior confused. [The h*ck. I'm just helping you get out of the situation and then you would harass me? Is this the side effect of Delusion?]

"Now I don't know how strong you are but, unless your confident in breaking through the glass that was built to contain a god I really wouldn't recommend trying to escape. You so much as scratch that glass and I drop you 40,000 feet and into the ocean."